Date: 2008-07-16 07:36 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lokifan
Where do I start with praise on this?

OMG you so entirely succeeded with the praise! Your comment has made me SO happy!

I can really see Ron acting like this.

Yes! *clings to you* Tell me more about how my dominant, kinky Ron is realistic. :d Seriously, I really enjoyed that first section and I'm glad you did too. And yay, you mentioned that line!

Everything he does...I just stared at my computer screen in shock (but not horror) and awe. And Draco's reaction to everything was just...so evocative and pained and awkward and brilliant. He wants so badly to be forgiven.

Oh, he does. Poor Draco. I love that you were awed by Ron - he's creative, we can say that much! I love that you liked Ron making Draco ride him! I loved writing that bit.

I want to see the power play between them, how life goes on after this...just...*Grabby hands* MOAR PLZ!

LOL. I'll think about it. I could see some directions to take, but the open ending is fun. And I would so never match the last line that has everybody sniffling!

P.S. We have more than a bit in common. Would you mind terribly if I friended you?

Not at all! *friends* I like new friends, and anyway any friend of [personal profile] lavillanueva's who likes dark porn is a friend of mine!
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