My first flame!
Nov. 3rd, 2007 11:02 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
lokifan_importHello! I've been intensely busy this last week; I just got back from an English lit trip. Twas brilliant, and much fun was had. I also got a prezzie on my return: my first flame!
I admit I was a little disappointed that it wasn't a classic "OMG HARRY AND DRACO ARE NOT GAI!!! NOT AT ALL...YOUR JUST DUM" type, but I am still extremely amused. Getting a ff.net account was worth it just to hear about my "horrifyingly twisted, malicious series destroying splendor".
Let me just quote a line from your story, "Afterwards, they lay curled in asweaty tangle among the bedsheets". Well, that's a rousing, INFORMATIVE,well-written story right there. I was really grabbed by the title, HONEY. Whatwere you thinking when you spewed this out? When a character is straight, whymust you twist their sexuality to your preference? If you MUST writefanfiction, can't you at LEAST accurately represent the characters? Thegrammar in this story is okay, but the plot is pulled out of the "genericfanfiction plotlines" grab bag. I can see it now, "Hey Harry let's fight andthen apologize and makeout!" "Okay, Harry darling. Would you like to becomeentangled in my sweaty bed sheets?" "Of course Malfoy!". Yes, indeed, that is what I would expect those characters to do...I scorn your writing, In all its horrifyingly twisted, malicous seriesdestroying splendor.
*gets back to destroying the series*
I admit I was a little disappointed that it wasn't a classic "OMG HARRY AND DRACO ARE NOT GAI!!! NOT AT ALL...YOUR JUST DUM" type, but I am still extremely amused. Getting a ff.net account was worth it just to hear about my "horrifyingly twisted, malicious series destroying splendor".
Let me just quote a line from your story, "Afterwards, they lay curled in asweaty tangle among the bedsheets". Well, that's a rousing, INFORMATIVE,well-written story right there. I was really grabbed by the title, HONEY. Whatwere you thinking when you spewed this out? When a character is straight, whymust you twist their sexuality to your preference? If you MUST writefanfiction, can't you at LEAST accurately represent the characters? Thegrammar in this story is okay, but the plot is pulled out of the "genericfanfiction plotlines" grab bag. I can see it now, "Hey Harry let's fight andthen apologize and makeout!" "Okay, Harry darling. Would you like to becomeentangled in my sweaty bed sheets?" "Of course Malfoy!". Yes, indeed, that is what I would expect those characters to do...I scorn your writing, In all its horrifyingly twisted, malicous seriesdestroying splendor.
*gets back to destroying the series*
