I was forced told to read this by our mutual friend [Bad username or site: @ livejournal.com], and god dammit am I glad that I did! Where do I start with praise on this? This was amazingly hot and disgusting and provocative and wrong and so deliciously right that I can hardly find the words to do anything justice, but I'll certainly try.

I really like how this is set up. How Ron doesn't much mind Malfoy there to start, as long as he's a kicked little puppy. But the way you built his rage up at every little thing he does and says is very realistic. I can really see Ron acting like this. And at the final explosion? This line: "It was what he’d always wanted. It wasn’t what he wanted at all." Completely killed me. GUH. It's so perfect I'm re-reading the series, and Goblet of Fire has the first part of that written all up and down Ron. It's only with seeing everything he has (the war, what's happened since, how people are moving on) that he can tack on the last part. Bravo. That bit alone made me love this story.

But then. Oho. The torture.

Ron is one sadistic bastard. And he (as well as you, for writing him this way) is made of win for it. Everything he does...I just stared at my computer screen in shock (but not horror) and awe. And Draco's reaction to everything was just...so evocative and pained and awkward and brilliant. He wants so badly to be forgiven. And I just can't...just...wow.

When you had Ron tell Draco to ride him...I just about came apart. I was hoping you'd go there...AND YOU DID. HOMG. SOOOO HOT. SRSLY. BRAVO!!!!

And the last line! Oh, man. It tore at my heart and my gut. There just...I need to see more of this. I want to see the power play between them, how life goes on after this...just...*Grabby hands* MOAR PLZ!

In short: Awesomeness. Personified.

P.S. We have more than a bit in common. Would you mind terribly if I friended you?