Christ, woman, why you have not been writing dub-con FOREVER is beyond me. This was so awesomely, sinfully, ridiculously hot.
*beams* Thank you, darling! Apparently I haven't been writing dub-con forever because I didn't have a Lindsay to make me!
he was so desperate and fragile. And I love how Ron didn't have mercy on him at all, no matter how much Draco had suffered, no matter how much he'd grown and changed since their time in school. It was so very Ron, to hold on to petty grudges like that.
Oh yeah, Ron is the KING of holding grudges. Poor Draco - he was so very vulnerable and he got no mercy.
My favourite thing might be the gag - the way Ron gagged him but left his hands free to do other things.
:d I love that you liked that! Coz yeah, I loved writing it so that Draco just obeyed, because he was resigned instead of because he was bound.
It was so fucking hot the way he worked himself up to it, kissing around Ron's erection before finally taking it in his mouth.
That was so fun (and hot) to write - his anxiety and submission. Forced blowjobs FTW!
I love that he was willing to be used and abused in pretty much any way but he didn't want to enjoy it himself.
I love your comments! So long and fangirly, and so insightful! Because that's exactly it - he would have done anything to be forgiven but it had to be punishment, and the idea that he was getting off on it... poor Draco.
He seemed so small and vulnerable and broken, like a child who doesn't want anything more than to be loved. The rest of the fic was smoking hot, but that last line did it for me on a whole nother level, a more raw, emotional level.
Oh, thank you so much! I love that this fic got to you on an emotional level. And yeah, he just wanted acceptance, nothing else - he was so vulnerable - and nobody knows whether he gets it or not!
It makes me want to play with him some more, drag out his punishment for ages, to see what other kinds of indignities he would be willing to suffer.
Oh I love you, you giant pervert. Funny how slashers all seem to have this reaction to a vulnerable Draco! Let's play with him, let's see what he'll put up with, let's hurt him some more and see what he'll do if he thinks he'll be loved afterwards.
And yes, I think it says something that the longest PWP you've ever written was a non-con piece - it says you should write MORE. XD Love you!!!!
Love you too!!! And hey, more non-con coming soon!
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*beams* Thank you, darling! Apparently I haven't been writing dub-con forever because I didn't have a Lindsay to make me!
he was so desperate and fragile. And I love how Ron didn't have mercy on him at all, no matter how much Draco had suffered, no matter how much he'd grown and changed since their time in school. It was so very Ron, to hold on to petty grudges like that.
Oh yeah, Ron is the KING of holding grudges. Poor Draco - he was so very vulnerable and he got no mercy.
My favourite thing might be the gag - the way Ron gagged him but left his hands free to do other things.
:d I love that you liked that! Coz yeah, I loved writing it so that Draco just obeyed, because he was resigned instead of because he was bound.
It was so fucking hot the way he worked himself up to it, kissing around Ron's erection before finally taking it in his mouth.
That was so fun (and hot) to write - his anxiety and submission. Forced blowjobs FTW!
I love that he was willing to be used and abused in pretty much any way but he didn't want to enjoy it himself.
I love your comments! So long and fangirly, and so insightful! Because that's exactly it - he would have done anything to be forgiven but it had to be punishment, and the idea that he was getting off on it... poor Draco.
He seemed so small and vulnerable and broken, like a child who doesn't want anything more than to be loved. The rest of the fic was smoking hot, but that last line did it for me on a whole nother level, a more raw, emotional level.
Oh, thank you so much! I love that this fic got to you on an emotional level. And yeah, he just wanted acceptance, nothing else - he was so vulnerable - and nobody knows whether he gets it or not!
It makes me want to play with him some more, drag out his punishment for ages, to see what other kinds of indignities he would be willing to suffer.
Oh I love you, you giant pervert. Funny how slashers all seem to have this reaction to a vulnerable Draco! Let's play with him, let's see what he'll put up with, let's hurt him some more and see what he'll do if he thinks he'll be loved afterwards.
And yes, I think it says something that the longest PWP you've ever written was a non-con piece - it says you should write MORE. XD Love you!!!!
Love you too!!! And hey, more non-con coming soon!