ext_6996 ([identity profile] redsnake05.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lokifan_import 2008-07-09 09:40 am (UTC)

Well, that managed to hit every filthy fandom kink I own. Delicious. I love the wonderful moment of uncertainty at the very end, when the reader realises that this might not be the end. I can just about see Ron's lips moving, and have no idea if I want him to say 'yes' or 'no'. I loved how you described Malfoy's pain, the physical and mental aspects of his humiliation and punishment. Thank you so much for sharing.

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