http://kuri-taichou.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kuri-taichou.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lokifan_import 2008-06-10 09:41 pm (UTC)

Aww, this was lovely. I like how you included the crossed-out things to help the reader understand their hidden feelings as well as the ones they projected towards each other. Overall it was very fun and endearing to read. <3
(52 comments)

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.