Byaghro ([identity profile] byaghro.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lokifan_import 2008-06-07 07:05 am (UTC)

Re: Light

Ooooh, I dig!! I like how you describe the transition from foreplay to sex with just a few words. And the last line is awesome!
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