Oh I love this! Incredible how old sentiments seem fresh in this new form. I was aching for Draco by about the fifth stanza, and the last one is just gorgeous.

This is such a treat! I don't think your original *needed* more, even though I craved it - but what a delight to see this continued. Amazing how you can evoke the passionate, half-angry sex in so few syllables. Draco only has to breathe on his neck - what a wonderful image!