XD Hello! Man, I was computer-less for a few days and then I sort of forgot I hadn't replied to this yet. Sorry. >_>
That fic of yours is pretty good! The shifting POVs work really well, especially since there's such a discrepancy between the two views of the situation. It does flow differently than something from on POV, obviously, but it works.
Heh, I can't remember when I found out bisexuality existed... it was probably in one of the many About Your Body/Puberty/Relationships books my mum bought me between the ages of 10 and 16. I do remember, though, that I was reading a book when I was about... 13 or 14 probably, in which two men "made love" (that were the exact words), and I just sort of stopped reading mid-sentence and went "Huh. How does that work?" I couldn't imagine the mechanics. XD
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That fic of yours is pretty good! The shifting POVs work really well, especially since there's such a discrepancy between the two views of the situation. It does flow differently than something from on POV, obviously, but it works.
Heh, I can't remember when I found out bisexuality existed... it was probably in one of the many About Your Body/Puberty/Relationships books my mum bought me between the ages of 10 and 16. I do remember, though, that I was reading a book when I was about... 13 or 14 probably, in which two men "made love" (that were the exact words), and I just sort of stopped reading mid-sentence and went "Huh. How does that work?" I couldn't imagine the mechanics. XD